Evaluation from teacher and class members of my first two posters

Teachers comments. The images don't really blend together to tell a narrative, they seem disjointed. The the picture of the wife might give to much away The clock image is good - try blend into the male or his eyes. Good tag line. Class members comments. Remove the love heart as it doesn't seem to fit in with the poster. Instead you could have the woman in the background. Repression suggests that the male is repressing bad thoughts in his head which shows a psychological element to the film. What is the significance of the clock? "Lost time is never found again" suggests maybe that the time is a big element in the film and it is also backed up by having the clock on the poster. The love heart suggests that there is a romance between the male and female( intimate relationship) The main character layered with a clock and the love heart surrounding the woman suggests his heart belongs to her The production name gives an indication into the genre of the film. Aimed at a mature audience due to the nature of the title as it is linked with psychological elements.

My first draft posters